I’m busy painting but as soon as I can I will read through this copy and have it posted to Amazon. I know it had a lot of errors. I appreciate those who could enjoy the story without being too …
Archive | July, 2014
New start to Family Law 3
The previous was pretty horrible. I trashed it and started over. This works better – more stuff happening now and less info dump.
Chapter 1
Lee was strapped in watching the big plot screen above the physical view ports. There …
Comments from elsewhere –
So far am told this is too much to absorb and keep straight for somebody who hasn’t read the previous books.
Rereading it I think it is too dense. It’s easy for me to understand – because it is all …
Snippet of April #6 –
I may put one more after this. Un-copyedited. Changed the ending twice perfecting it…
The Fox and Hare was busy. It had been so busy of late that April felt obligated to inquire what evenings were less solidly booked. The …