April has been edited twice. Not the best job in the world. Now it is being edited to put it on paper. I am going through it myself as I don’t want to need to re-edit it for paper as I had to do Family Law. I’ve learned a few things in the last decade. It will be cleaner. Since it is the first of series and sets the expectations of the reader it seems important to me. I’m not sure I’ll finish it tonight (3/19) but tomorrow for sure and whatever time Amazon takes to digest it. I’ll put a notice on the description blurb and the front page. You can force a reload to your device on your Kindle library page.
After several sets of eyes there were still some extra spaces, misspellings and extra characters. But the main changes are I didn’t punctuate run on quotes correctly before, and I added much attribution of quotes. I greatly reduced he and she, replacing them with proper names. I changed a few names that got garbled. Other than that it’s the same story. There were no entire paragraphs or even sentences removed or replaced. I hope if you re-read it as some do that you like the changes.
I just downloaded (day before yesterday) the latest revision of April (#1) to re-read for the 4th or 5th time and jotted down about 25 places where there were mistakes (mostly punctuation, some other stuff). Do you have an email I can send them to you? (assuming you are interested)
Love the books!
Wayne
Sure, mchandler@ameritech.net. I welcome corrections.
3/25 – I thank you for these – but I ran through the first 8 or 9 and found they had all been corrected. I’m not sure you have the latest edition. It should say revised 3/19/2015 right on the title page. I’m not 100% sure how to force a download. I’ve been told some by people you have to turn on updates on your library page. Others said that still didn’t work. I’ve e-mailed Amazon about this but they have yet to reply.