Mackey Chandler

An unedited snippet of my WIP

“If we ever eat again after this,” Lee said. “The pastry tray has certainly grown since the last one I ordered.”

The server smiled.

“We have a new pastry chef and she’s showing off.”

He left happy they noticed.

“You see why the staff like her?” April asked. “She not only said thank you, she chatted with him like a person. Lots of the rich and famous treat the help like furniture”

“That’s pretty stupid to do with the people handling your food,” Lee said. “That’s begging for karma to make a special guest appearance.”

“She’s so polite she says thank you to the house computer,” Tish told them.

“Better to always use it than forget for someone who will miss it,” Lee insisted.

“I can’t fault that,” April admitted.

“Sweet little shrieking goddesses!” Tish said around a full mouth.

“What is it dear?” Lee seemed worried.

“What are these?” Tish asked holding the half she hadn’t bit off. The entire tray was rimmed with them.

“Baklava,” April said, “but it looks like she gave us several kinds. Some are made with pistachios, some with walnuts, and these little cups look like they’re maybe almonds.”

“There are Greek and Persian kinds,” Jeff said. “Probably others. They use different spices. The Greek Isle Bakery in Armstrong must sell a dozen kinds.”

Tish finished hers, licked her fingers, and looked like she was having a hard time deciding which kind to try next.

“Nobody ever told us such a thing exists.” It seemed an accusation.

“Badgers like sweet stuff,” Lee said in a huge understatement.

“This is all expensive stuff, labor intensive,” Jeff explained. “It usually requires a big population making good money before an area can support markets or restaurants with these kinds of ethnic treats. If they have a good pastry chef here now you should ask if she can make you some strudels or fancy cakes for you.”

“Oh, I will, I will,” Lee vowed.

Tish had another in hand but delayed to ask Trix what he thought.

He held up a sticky digit, unwilling to rush the experience so she went ahead.

Trix replied in his own sweet time.

“I think we should do whatever necessary to learn the art of these and introduce them to Far Away. Grandfather can set a shop up in town and share the fortune these will make. That can start to repay him for all the extraordinary kindness he showed us. He owed basic hospitality but he made us comfortable.”

“Fine, it’s a plan, but what do you think of them?” Tish insisted.

“I see four kinds and I think I must limit myself to one of each or I will binge on them until I am sick.”

“I think he means he likes them,” Lee interpreted.

Tish just nodded, her mouth full again.

“Watch out he doesn’t try to steal your pastry chef away before you get a decent chance to enjoy her,” Jeff warned.

“That reminds me of a funny story about when we first started the cabbage mines at Central,” April said.

The Badgers nodded, eager to hear but busy chewing.

A couple of hours later Lee had a much better sense of what the triad were and how they arrived at their power than she had before. April and Jeff kept prompting each other, one memory triggering another, laughing at remembrances. Their old habit of deflection and avoidance was abandoned. They answered questions freely Even embarrassing questions about failures and missed opportunities.

Jeff and April’s internal clock finally caught up to Derfhome time and they were ready for a late dinner. Lee was far more than ready Tish looked repelled at the idea. A huge swath of the pastry tray was bare in front of her. She made a negating gesture and invited them to proceed without her before excusing herself to waddle off to bed. Trix was visibly conflicted but decided it was his duty to escort her back to their suite.

24 responses to “An unedited snippet of my WIP”

  1. Brent says:

    Glad to see April and Jeff making an appearance at Derfhome. I enjoy seeing the interactions between them and Lee (and now some young Badger friends).
    Looking forward to the new book as your schedule permits.

  2. Teresa says:

    How fun!!! I can’t wait to read the book!

  3. ardbeg thrustspear says:

    *twitch*

    Pistachio

    GAHHHHHHH

  4. Monica says:

    Thank you! April and Family Law are my favorites!

  5. Zebulon Dakota says:

    You have no idea how much I look forward to your snippets (and even more to the books that follow!) 🙂

  6. Mike Rouzer says:

    Mac,
    first – can’t wait for the book.
    2 thanks for the snippet
    3 Typo – swath is the word — A huge swarth of the pastry tray was bare in front of her.

    4 I have a new email

  7. Delores says:

    I really enjoy the snippets.
    I am really looking forward to both the next snippet and the book.

  8. Cheryl says:

    Oh boy, can’t wait. Sounds like another winner

  9. Michael says:

    Oh the suspense is killing me, I can’t wait to read more!

    Goy Tish will be famous among the Badgers for introducing new sweets! It might be the best way ever to promote female land and property owners. Lee needs to get the pastry shop owned by a female Badger as a part of her social engineering projects. I would suggest Tish but she might eat the profits 🙂 Once they have precedence it makes future female owners more possible.

  10. david says:

    Damn, every snippet just makes me want the new book more.

    Please don’t keep us in suspense any longer.

    Finish the book and publish it ASAP!!!!

    • Emmy says:

      Rude. Take your time Mac. We all love your books, but your health and life take precedent. better a happy author who loves making stories than one chained to the wood of your readers greed.

      • JimHVR says:

        Amen, Emmy! We addicts need to manage our own addictions. And patiently…gah….yes, patiently await our next stupendous fix!

  11. Jacques says:

    Nice. Very much looking forward to the next installment (snippet and full ebook.)
    – Jacques

  12. Sarah says:

    The new website looks very nice!

  13. Ricardo Venegas says:

    I love this series.
    I will probably start with book one again when the release date is announced 😸.

  14. Michael says:

    Nice website refresh!

  15. Ben says:

    Thanks for the snippet!
    Also, I love the updated theme for the site.
    Lastly, is there any news you can share regarding the April AudioBooks? (I’ve only seen the first book available via “VirtualVoice”.)

  16. Can’t wait. Loved all of your books! Thank you for writing them. Many hours of joy for sure.

    What is the next book coming out.

  17. Bill says:

    Have you decided not to do a sequel to “Fair Trade”? Or is this something that might be done if you get the mood? I saw that brief scene where the here visits the planet of the tigers, as part of a possible sequel. It is certainly a grand idea.

    • Mac says:

      It’s something I might do if I have the time. I’m 77 and having a hard time being a caretaker for my wife. I’m looking into hiring a housekeeper. If I don’t have to do laundry, cooking, and shopping I think my increased writing would more than pay for the help. We’ll see. – Mac’

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