Fair Trade published.

I may make a few small edits but the last three beta readers have been repeats. Enjoy….

Minor typos and errors updated just now 9/26 evening. They take time to post.

https://www.amazon.com/dp/B09GYNTLTV

32 Responses to Fair Trade published.

  1. GL September 23, 2021 at 10:15 am #

    Um, is this book intended to be available via Kindle Unlimited? Right now it isn’t, and I recall there was an issue with one of your previous books.

    I imagine I’ll read this one anyway, but Kindle Unlimited certainly makes it a “no brainer” for those of us who’ve joined that program.

    • GL September 23, 2021 at 10:17 am #

      Argggh! I am an idot!

      The book *is* available via Kindle Unlimited if I check in the right browser window.

      Thanks Mac!

      Keep well and I’m now going to be up late. Cheers!

  2. Cheryl September 23, 2021 at 11:51 pm #

    I’m almost halfway through the book so far and love it. Just wanted to let you know. Will review when I finish

    • Mac September 24, 2021 at 12:37 pm #

      Thanks I do appreciate reviews.

  3. GL September 24, 2021 at 12:38 am #

    A decent novel and I enjoyed it. Not as much as the April/Family Law novels, but worth a read.

    Mac: you NEED a proof reader. Seriously. (Sigh.) Dig my email out and send me a chapter of one of your books in some editable format and I’ll work it over for you. (I read my email once a month or so unless prompted though. Just sayin’.)

    Most of the errors in this book are punctuation. There are the usual number of problems with ambiguous or incorrect pronouns, and the lack of “ly” suffixes per Mac’s self-described native dialect of English remain jarring.

    FYI “depreciate” and “deprecate” are not synonyms.

    Still, good work … but some polish would make for much easier and more enjoyable reading!

    Cheers!

    • Mac September 24, 2021 at 8:31 am #

      I’m sending you a Word file. Have at it.
      I don’t understand the comment about depreciate/deprecate because I searched for both words in the document and found neither.

      • MRE September 26, 2021 at 8:42 pm #

        Just did a quick search: “Depreciating” humor, should be deprecating humor, chapter 9, 30% in. Still saving my copy to read for a vacation! (I write a series under Robert Hinshaw and got tagged in my reviews for my not-quite-perfect editing too, which I thought was pretty good at the time! So I’m sympathetic.)

        • Mac September 26, 2021 at 9:09 pm #

          OK found it – don’t know why I didn’t in a previous search. Will fix it when current update clears.

          • GL October 12, 2021 at 4:56 pm #

            Great Mac! I’ll go check my email. Sorry for the delay, but, ugh, email!

            When I write I make mistakes too … and so does every “professional” author I know. Trying to stamp as many errors as possible is as good as anyone can aim at.

            I’ll endeavor to have something back to you in a couple of days.

            Stay well.

            (Well but STILL in lockdown here. Let’s not talk about that!)

  4. Myzifer September 24, 2021 at 3:04 am #

    This book made my day, I picked it up last night and starting reading it this morning (UK) after finishing my previous book.

    I was in the shower listening to it with Text-to-speech when I realised it was Thee! alien book I’d been begging Mackey to write/finish for years and a huge smile spread across my face.

    Sadly I’m not going to be a very productive worker today as I listen to this book while working from home.

  5. Kevin September 25, 2021 at 3:08 am #

    LOVE it, a third of the way done and ite 2am laughing out loud. When readed your doing an invasion story I was like ok any you do is good, but its been done. You take everything and put it on its head. Love it

  6. Big Ben September 25, 2021 at 3:50 pm #

    Highly enjoyable storytelling as usual, Mac.

    Most of the editing goofs I noticed were excess quotation marks, things like:
    “Thank you again. Lead on,” he invited Davidson.”
    There were quite a few instances of this, but I wasn’t particularly bothered. I like your books so much that I honestly would rather have them released a few weeks faster than perfectly polished. The beauty of ebooks is that you can fine tune them and release updates as needed, and even crowdsource the copy editing.

    And when Barnard said, “That’ll buff right out,” after the Tiger spaceship crashed I cracked up laughing. I was a Heavy Wheel Vehicle Mechanic and Recovery Operator in the Army a few decades back and to this day I remember saying and hearing that exact phrase innumerable times as we hoisted some impressively busted vehicles on the hook. No one does unintentional destructive testing as well as a grunt … and you’d never actually buff anything with CARC paint, which was always part of the joke.

    I’m glad you’re considering wrapping up the April series and continuing their adventures in the Family Law series. Now that you’ve introduced us to this new cast of characters I want to follow their ongoing adventures too, and being a greedy old bastard I don’t want your time and efforts expended on several different series simultaneously.

    Finally, I’d consider your first “alien first contact” story to be Paper or Plastic, which I still go back and reread every few years … and can’t help but notice the similarities between Roger and Jed, Barnard and Josh. You do like writing about Soldiers With Unusual Skills.

    Now I’m off to leave a review on Amazon. Cheers!

    • Mac September 25, 2021 at 9:02 pm #

      Thanks I do appreciate specific problems. I’ll fix the example and look for similar.
      Finished that 9/26 evening.

      • Melvyn Barker September 26, 2021 at 12:38 pm #

        My appreciative comment got deleted but thanks anyway

        • Mac September 26, 2021 at 3:25 pm #

          No idea why. Wasn’t me. Maybe an address WordPress doesn’t like? Thanks for the appreciation.

          • Melvyn Barker September 27, 2021 at 6:58 am #

            It seems that I can post a reply to your or another’s comment, but a new post is treated as spam and deleted. Life’s too short to worry about it. Its enough that I can tell you how much I enjoy your books and look forward to the next one.

          • Mac September 27, 2021 at 8:12 pm #

            Thank you. WordPress doesn’t make me very happy either – it’s better than nothing and free. I don’t want to put a big effort and time into a post every day blog.

          • Mac September 27, 2021 at 8:16 pm #

            I checked to see if somehow one of your posts got labels spam or trashed. I don’t see anything sorry. WordPress isn’t the greatest but it’s free and I don’t want a blog I post to every day. The lady who maintains it is retired and I only bother her when it stops working at all.

  7. Mac September 26, 2021 at 3:27 pm #

    I’m going through again slowly and have found some missing or extra quotes and a few words. I’ll have those corrected and posted tonight.
    Posted 6:40pm 9/26. It will take time to show…

  8. Sarah September 26, 2021 at 7:21 pm #

    Loved the book, and made sure to leave a review on Amazon. Thanks!

  9. Michele Starr September 30, 2021 at 4:44 pm #

    I am seldom moved to emotions other than humor when reading SF and yet I was moved to tears by the chapter on the alien shield. Thank you for giving me a very moving story line. It balances the laughter your writing also invokes.

  10. HamsterDesTodes October 1, 2021 at 8:07 am #

    Bought it, read it in a day.
    A very decent book, but it felt like it’s missing something to make the step to great read.

    I would say it’s missing suspense, but the April books aren’t thrillers either and I love them so much that I reread them again and again. So it can’t be that. Perhaps it’s the fact that we didn’t get to know the characters closely before we were thrown in what basically amounts to a slice of life story? The first Aprils were rather action-packed, so we got to know them all while being dazzled by shiny explosions before we got to the slower pace and deeper content.
    Hard to say much without spoilers, but even the action parts of this story weren’t very actiony IMO. Or perhaps it’s the time skips towards the end? Too many PoVs for a first book? I have no clue, but something kept me from engaging as deeply as other books, even compared to the kinda-similar Paper or Plastic.

    Don’t get me wrong, I wouldn’t miss this book and I certainly don’t regret spending the 4€, but I probably wont reread it.

    • Michael Brazier October 1, 2021 at 2:30 pm #

      I think I know why you didn’t engage with it – or, at least, I had the same reaction you did. The story has no real conflict, either external or internal. At several points people start doing the usual arrogant nonsense that antagonists in Mac’s other books do, but they all get promptly sat on by more sensible people without creating any real problems for the main characters. Similarly, none of the characters change appreciably over the course of the book. Jed, Three Fingers and Blue are the same people at the end that they were at the start (to the point that when, near the end, Three Fingers says his people have changed too much to be happy on their home world, I honestly don’t know what he’s talking about.)

      The April books, which you mention, do have their overall conflict, between the tyrannous welfare states of Earth and the protagonists in space trying to escape them, and that conflict sustains interest in the story when the pace slows down. Even the Foys in California, who aren’t really connected to the overall plot, connect to the conflict, by living and behaving decently in a zone where government has all but vanished. When I look for a similar theme or conflict in Fair Trade, I’m coming up dry.

  11. Dorcas Gray October 1, 2021 at 11:42 am #

    I enjoyed this book as much as your other books! Good job!

  12. Benny October 3, 2021 at 11:08 pm #

    You keep forcing me to give you money. Keep up the excellent work. Looking forward to sending you more money in the future.

  13. Dana m Whitman October 7, 2021 at 1:35 am #

    I loved it. Thank you for another great book.

  14. Ed Greenberg October 8, 2021 at 7:40 am #

    Very good book. I’m enjoying the humorous dialog. I laugh every few pages. I’m at 93% now and will probably finish it today.

  15. Harry October 12, 2021 at 11:54 am #

    As usual Mac, I downloaded your new book as soon as it was available on Kindle, read it at a sitting, enjoying it immensely, and have since posted a 5 star review on Amazon. I don’t let the typos and edits annoy me, though I’d be happy to proof any drafts you want done, Mac. Now, when’re the next April and FL installments coming out? The problem with a new Mackey Chandler book is that reading it always leaves you wanting more. I may have to go back and reread the April saga yet again while I wait for more.

    • Mac October 13, 2021 at 10:33 am #

      The next April book bridging to Family Law is started. I’m not sure one book will do that. We’ll see.

  16. Michael Doyle October 13, 2021 at 5:27 am #

    I just read this and really enjoyed it.
    Several laugh-out-loud moments, mostly around aliens’ culture shock.

    A sequel set a few years later once contact with the various aliens has been re-established might be interesting.

    I gave you a 5* review on Amazon.co.uk.

    thanks and keep up the good work.

    • Mac October 13, 2021 at 10:32 am #

      Thanks. I appreciate all the reviews. They are coming faster on this book.

  17. Igor October 15, 2021 at 4:52 am #

    Finished it last night (around 3 AM). Great read! Once again, you knocking it out of the park Mackey. Now… take some time off (an hour or two… three?) and write the next one! 🙂

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